Word imitation
Original statement (1): he was so fat that his chin would have been underwater in the sallow and of any swimming-pool in the world.
Imitation (a): he was so fat that he can’t get in the door directly. He needs to turn aside and get in by the right or left part of his body.
Imitation (b): he was so stingy that he had not take a shower since few months to save a lot of water.
Original statement: But Mr. Fox was too clever for them. He always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face, and this meant that if any man were lurking in the shadows ahead, the wind would carry the smell of that man to Mr. Fox nose from far away.
Imitation: he was too cunning for them. He always knew where they hide to hunt him from the smell that the winds carry to his nose from far away. He could change his direction before they see him a 1000 yard of their spot. He would have been get food to his family with they saw him and waited all the night at the time he was having dinner with his family.
Word count: 204
Saturday, October 24, 2009
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